<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post2856463055389313100..comments</id><updated>2010-10-25T08:52:14.108-07:00</updated><category term='One Crazy Summer'/><category term='The Curious Garden'/><category term='Description'/><category term='Short Stories'/><category term='Where the Mountain Meets the Moon'/><category term='Research'/><category term='Charles and Emma'/><category term='All the World'/><category term='Calpurnia Tate'/><category term='Voice'/><category term='TIPS'/><category term='A Season of Gifts'/><category term='Picture Books'/><category term='A Penguin Story'/><category term='Mirror Mirror'/><category term='Touch Blue'/><category term='Historical Fiction'/><category term='Nonfiction'/><category term='UBIQUITOUS: Celebrating Nature&apos;s Survivors'/><category term='Plot'/><category term='Names'/><category term='Summary'/><category term='Characters'/><category term='Suspense'/><category term='Marcelo in the Real World'/><category term='Revision'/><category term='Language'/><category term='Chapters'/><category term='Poetry'/><category term='Guest Post'/><category term='Setting'/><category term='Absolutely True Diary'/><category term='Geektastic'/><category term='Literary Device'/><category term='Dialogue'/><category term='Wisdom'/><category term='Narrative Hook'/><category term='Backstory'/><category term='When You Reach Me'/><category term='The Snow Day'/><category term='Scene'/><category term='Alchemy and Meggy Swann'/><category term='Red Sings from Treetops'/><category term='Newbery'/><category term='Theme'/><category term='subplots'/><category term='Turtle in Paradise'/><category term='Social Issues'/><category term='Editors'/><category term='Mystery'/><category term='Title/Cover'/><category term='Blackbringer'/><category term='Audience'/><category term='Point of View'/><category term='Story Structure'/><title type='text'>Comments on Story Sleuths: ROOTING FOR A PRICKLY CHARACTER: Turtle in Paradis...</title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/feeds/2856463055389313100/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html'/><author><name>Allyson Valentine Schrier</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/15060010674699666764</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='28' src='http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_duGrvc5hn6w/SyHXgEbPQYI/AAAAAAAAAF4/XOElKDvcqg4/S220/blog+portrait_edited-1.jpg'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>4</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-3312501034367504093</id><published>2010-10-25T08:52:14.108-07:00</published><updated>2010-10-25T08:52:14.108-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Thank you, Helen! You&amp;#39;re right about both side...</title><content type='html'>Thank you, Helen! You&amp;#39;re right about both sides needing to be present in a character, which Jennifer Holm does a great job of showing in Turtle. Hope your writing is going well!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/3312501034367504093'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/3312501034367504093'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html?showComment=1288021934108#c3312501034367504093' title=''/><author><name>Heather Hedin Singh</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16042719762118668832</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='05381353912106079909'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_63id3vYSpH4/S0qWIXCO8bI/AAAAAAAAAEM/73FoGZgIk1I/S220/square+header.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-2856463055389313100' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/posts/default/2856463055389313100' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-795524111'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-2395723380999203580</id><published>2010-10-23T10:58:22.322-07:00</published><updated>2010-10-23T10:58:22.322-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Great post! I love James Scott Bell&amp;#39;s books, a...</title><content type='html'>Great post! I love James Scott Bell&amp;#39;s books, and this is really stellar advice. I&amp;#39;ve found myself, at one time or another, going a little too far in one direction - either giving my character too much attitude or making her vulnerable to the point of being weak. This is a great reminder that you need to include both ends of the spectrum.</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/2395723380999203580'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/2395723380999203580'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html?showComment=1287856702322#c2395723380999203580' title=''/><author><name>helenlandalf</name><uri>http://helenlandalf.livejournal.com/</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img1.blogblog.com/img/openid16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-2856463055389313100' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/posts/default/2856463055389313100' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-1378579790'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-6312717541458362003</id><published>2010-09-29T16:22:36.409-07:00</published><updated>2010-09-29T16:22:36.409-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Thank you, Faith! The prickly character is somethi...</title><content type='html'>Thank you, Faith! The prickly character is something I&amp;#39;ve been struggling with myself. Happy writing!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/6312717541458362003'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/6312717541458362003'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html?showComment=1285802556409#c6312717541458362003' title=''/><author><name>Heather Hedin Singh</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/16042719762118668832</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='OpenSocialUserId' value='05381353912106079909'/><gd:image xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='32' height='32' src='http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_63id3vYSpH4/S0qWIXCO8bI/AAAAAAAAAEM/73FoGZgIk1I/S220/square+header.jpg'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-2856463055389313100' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/posts/default/2856463055389313100' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' name='blogger.itemClass' value='pid-795524111'/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5891516019371645116.post-3726261889179863919</id><published>2010-09-27T14:41:39.237-07:00</published><updated>2010-09-27T14:41:39.237-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Thank you; this is great advice for something I of...</title><content type='html'>Thank you; this is great advice for something I often struggle with. I&amp;#39;m printing this post out to keep in my GREAT ADVICE folder!</content><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/3726261889179863919'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/5891516019371645116/2856463055389313100/comments/default/3726261889179863919'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://www.storysleuths.com/2010/09/rooting-for-prickly-character-turtle-in.html?showComment=1285623699237#c3726261889179863919' title=''/><author><name>Faith E. 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